Thursday, October 16, 2008

Portfolio task 4: Writing difficulties in engineering classes

The word “essay” has haunted me since my bridge course commenced in CELC. Dreaming the university life could call it an end, I was only to find it appeared with a higher frequency in my courses: term essay, portfolio, and summary. That I am quite average in my work results in my worry and fear about English. The writing difficulties I addresses in this entry will be more about EG1471 since I do not take many engineering modules this semester. Basically long winded and vague expressions, low producing speed and limited vocabulary rank the top three among my weaknesses in English writing.

Vague meaning often comes hand in hand with the slow process. Occasion is I was trying so hard to put lots of ideas within maybe only two to three sentences. More than often, my efforts turned out to be long-winded sentences with ambiguous meaning. The more time I spend writing a sentence, the longer it takes for the readers to understand. Be direct and simple is the solution. Shorten the sentences and, if necessary, split them. Self-editing is also an approach to delete the meaningless words or phrases. Making every word count reduces ambiguity and the length. Slow as this process may be, it is worthy and indispensible for writing. Future writing in engineering classes is more academic as it is related to lab reports and presenting facts and theory. Clear and organized writing is highly-valued.

The consistently weak in my writing is not only due to the sentences structure but also the impropriate word choices and rudimental vocabulary. Even though the readability of my writing is improved, my words still look pale and weak in accuracy because of the limited vocabulary. No input, no output. Without a strong storage of words to back me up, the writing is doomed to be at a beginner's level. To enlarge my vocabulary is the root to clear the symptoms like vague expression and low speed of writing. The root to get a large vocabulary is to expose myself to English, namely, read more.

Besides to be concise and accurate, I have to change my attitude and accept the fact that I have to live with English, moreover, advanced English. Though it just happens that I am quick tempered (though hardly can be identified by appearance) and a good command of English calls for accumulation/ time, I still get joys from reading English books. Utilizing the areas I interest in to activate those I used to escape may help me to be a self-starter in learning and progress faster.

7 comments:

justinlim said...

Hey Hu Xuan...dont mind i leave u a comment..??hehe..Overall i thought that you have organized well your article which makes me to understand easily...however there are some terms i do not understand...can u please clarify???..especially the one on the "low producing speed"....I guess the the second paragraph u trying to potray is on RUN OFF sentences??...Personally i have the tendency to do such mistakes as you. Trying to explain everthing in one sentence will surely make the reader confuse.

I think there were some problems in your sentence structure....but personally i am not quite sure with myself...For example, "To enlarge my vocabulary is the root to clear the symptoms like vague expression and low speed of writing"....i think " the root" is redundant...

The another sentence is "The consistently weak in my writing is not only due to the sentences structure but also the impropriate word choices and rudimental vocabulary"....I am not sure about u stating " the consistently weak in my writting".....WIll it be better if i suggest " The consistency in my weak writting..."
I hope i am write, please correct me if i am wrong....

I think u have used some good vocabulary in your article which was very encouraging...though it had caused me to open up my dictionary to search for those vocabs....heheh...

A good piece of work overall...keep it up!!!!

PJIyong said...

Hi Hu Xuan..
The first thing i would like to mention is that your vocabulary is not that bad as what you state in your essay. I think it is much better than mine.

Well, I think Justin had pointed out most of the errors. but i found this sentence "That I am quite average in my work results in my worry and fear about English." sound like fragment.

Besides that, i had seen you varies the sentence structure. It makes the essay interesting. I feel my essay is very dull as i repeat in the same tone. Overall, it is quite well done. I do enjoy reading it...

Hu Xuan said...

Thank you Justin and PeiJun. I could feel the areas you pointed out were unidiomatic when I was writing the entry. Haha… learn a new phrase “run off sentence”. I think the other 2 areas pointed out by Justin were correct. Thanks. As so the that clause, I was intend to use a subject clause. Not sure whether it is wrong.

Cathy (Rao Ying) said...

Your idea is very clear. As the first two comments has already points out almost all the errors, I would like to say that you have a clear insight view of your own problems with the language, such as the how a single sentence can be improved. Besides, I think your organization is very good, with a proper thesis statement, coherent supporting body paragraphs. Although it seems no ending, but i think it is ok in such a situation, as long as you have already explained your idea clearly, and with the separate summary of each points in different paragraphs. Overall, well done. I believe you can do it~~~

PJIyong said...

Well, I also not very sure about it. Perhaps I am wrong.

Anonymous said...

Hello Hu Xuan,
The problems that you mentioned sound familiar to me because those are what I am facing also.
The arrangement of the essay is good. The points that you wanted to explain were clearly stated in the introduction paragraph. However, the passage has no conclusion.
I like your effort in dealing with the problems. Reading is really the best way.
Overall, well done. Let us overcome our problems in writing and improve it together.

Michael Ng said...

Well, based on all your articles I've read, I have a basic idea of where you can improve for your English. Basically, you are quite weak in grammar, but in terms of ideas and content your articles are usually very good. In fact I believed that all your good ideas are strongly hindered by your weak grammar. Focus and improve on that, then for sure you will be writing great essays. Vocabulary wise you seem to be ok although you are using some words wrongly. However, focus on grammar first, as good vocabulary will naturally come to you with time. Good luck with improving your English!